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Take off my mask and leave the lies to the liars

how many times have i felt so low
and yet looked so high
like i could never be broken
but inside i was torn

broken && bleeding

and the only thing that made me happy was the


FACT

I AM ALIVE

and the only person that can take that away from me
is a deranged serial killer
and even they could never deny
that i had lived
and still live on
in someones memory...

so haha murderer

I still win

because

I'm ALIVE

even if I'm dying on the inside

Well??

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  • faithwhisperer silver member
    January 24, 2008

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    I did like your thought that no one can take life away from us, no matter what! That is absolutely true, and a profound thought! Thanks for entering!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 24, 2008

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    Interesting twist, I love it

    Best of luck in the contest
    .♥.
    Stay safe
    ~Manda