Just for once
I wish that all mankind
Could share the earth
With all creatures
Great and small
To live freely
And share in the beauty
That we were given
By the creator
Many moons ago
To walk tall
To feel loved by all
And not looked upon
As an enemy
But as a friend
To be as one with nature
To be together in harmony
To give without return
A feeling of hope
A feeling of serenity
To sit side by side
With any brother or sister
And speak with one voice
Praising the gift received
Of Mother Earth
In a list
A contest entry
- Wish On A Falling Star!!! by SummerlandRayne.
799 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You are my kind of person. I love nature to the fullest. Animals i adore. This is one wonderful poem that reaches to the heart and sings. I can almost hear a tune playing in the background while i read this. It must be nature keeping rhythm with your thoughts. Fantastic read.
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A vision of peace and harmony where the only tears shed would be in happiness. I look forward to it becoming a reality
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mike...
it would be a day to remember
if those around would take this to heart...and maybe this world for once would be appreciated!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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we all wish for this I think so the question then comes to mind; if we all wish it, why does it not happen?
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even just for once,,would be good enough, then all would see why it's a wish. Thanks for your thought
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theres nothing else to do after reading this piece but nod :]
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To share and praise in adoration
without the grip of stangulation
but hearts holding each life one
with pulse of joy, in timeless sun
embracing life and one another
in sustenance, both sister, brother
bear witness of the lion, lamb
harmonious in the Great I AM.
I love your poem, Mike. Each new morning is a gift.
~ Karen
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Hello.
Touching words, that speak of much. Respecting ourselves, as well as everything else, as well as showing a deep love of nature, and I didn’t just get that from your words, or the grass background, hahaha. You write of a dream many of us share, although it appears that this dream is waiting for people to wake up and actually make it. Congratulations on your gold, and my regards.
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Good
Wonderful words beautifully written
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Thank you for stopping by and for commenting. It is a dream worth holding onto.
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This would be a great thing if it could/would happen
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beautiful message you've versed here Mikey...
I share these sentiments...I think I would add that I wish people could be happy with what they have instead of wondering about the grass on the other side...
well deserved gold
Tasha
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Such a great wish. I wish the same thing. I think you write beautifully, this deserved to be a winner. great write, my father dear. Love, Tracy
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Niaish Tracy...
I am honoured that you enjoyed this one. It was surely a wish shared by many.
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this is beautiful
i love it and i have wished this since i was young
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Niaish my friend...
years of wishing are always worth the wait. It is when we can continue to dream and wish for their coming true that makes it worthwhle.
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Awesome
Wow, really great poem! We need to strive to be better people. This is a really "real" piece, and it had a great strength to it... especially the "And speak with one voice" line in the last stanza. That was great Keep it up!!!
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Beautiful poem and I agree and hope that you get all you wish for and more--earth safe and still beautiful! Congratulations on the gold!
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A beautiful write with a wonderful message that so many of us would love to see come true...even if it was just once...congrat's on the well deserved Gold...
Best,
mystic
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very, very good. it speaks out!
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Thank you, really glad you liked it.
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If only... someday this may come about, Mike and in the meantime we need to all pull together, do what needs to be done.
An inspiring poem and something to seriously think upon.
Very deserving of the Gold trophy it brought you
Dee
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Thanks Dee
One of my thinking mood poems. I sit in silence and work my thoughts to the page.
I'm really pleased you liked it.
The Gold was a complete bonus tho.
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Thank You all for your comments on this one. I really appreciate the time you took to read and find the true meaning behind this one. Thank You.
It is an honour to recieve the Gold as well, that has made this another memorable achievement for me.
Thanks for running this one Az
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Beautiful sentiments and congrats on the gold!
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Ahhh what a wonderful thing it would be if life were really this way. Beauty and harmony all around, No wars, no famine, no arguments……It would be something we could all dream about and wish to come true. Maybe, just maybe, one day it could happen.
Beautifully written Mike.
Ann
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Oh how I wish Mike...
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Beautifully done MIke. I do love the serenity of this piece and it is definitely along my lines of thinking. Soul food here! Bravo!
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I love this piece Mike! Great write and I wish you luck in this contest!
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BREATH TAKING
All mankind to share the Earth, creatures great and small...brother to brother and as one voice, freedom safe for all.Your words are beautiful my Hetane!
A wonderful wish upon a falling star to unite the world as one...sighs...* hug*Thank you for being you*hug*
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so very very true, it is a magnificent dream, and people have been dreaming it for so long....nice poem with a magic message.....peace
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Beautifully penned !
Yes indeed...what a wonderful world that would be Unfortunately I don't think we will ever get to this point 
It is a wonderful dream though and nobody can take our dreams away from us. Great entry and I wish you all the best of luck in this contest
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Oh my dear friend...how I share this blessed wish with you!!! Lovely words...a prayer that flowed from your soul!!! Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest!!!
Az
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