As I lay beside you at night and look at your sleeping angelic face, in my mind I keep asking 'Do you really love me?'
Do you love the way I caress you're beautiful strong built body until you give under my touch?
Or are you telling me lies just to get me to hush.
Do you really love me? Can you honestly look in my eyes and tell me that I'm the only woman you'll ever be with for eternity?
Do you really love me for making you feel like a man who is full of luck? Or is the only reason why you're with me is to get a good freaky bedtime buck.
Do you like how I can make your every dream and fantasy come true, makimg you feel better when you feel sad and blue?
Boy I was born to make your world a better place to live in, how you could you have doubts about loving me?
Honey do you receive this warm feeling that makes me shiver every time I'm around you? Or do you feel no attraction to not even quiver under my lips or touch.
At the end of the night, under the millions of stars that look like tiny little candles, as we lay beside each other, exhausted after our time of rough play, I look into your beautiful brown eyes and ask you..'Do you really love me?'
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A contest entry
- Do you love me? by Welcome-To-Hell.
800 points, ended January 24, 11 entries
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Comments
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You have captured feelings and thoughts in this poem that a lot of people will be able to relate to if you ask me.
Even though this is prose, I quite like it because you've opened your heart for so many people to read.
Thanks for this entry!
Leander -
I don't really know about this one. Dont get me wrong, i liked it, but I was afraid that this was gonna happen. I'm not going out with this guy yet, so this doesn't really help me.....
♥Summmer Moonstone♥ -
Ok I do like the way you conveyed your feelings and it fit the prompt so very well, the only thing I wonder is about the layout of the write it felt a tad jumbled to me but aside of that was wonderful best of luck in the contest
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