Please come back Miss Spider...
weaving tomorrows into todays across the starlit ocean
Our paths were once aligned
Then torn apart
Forgive me if have you mistaken for someone else.
I lean in as if to
inhale you
For you fill me
A stream so violent
so strained
You are in Love with us
For this I devote my all to you
Come back Miss Spider
I need you to wait a little longer
I am not finished what I have to say
We can sit and mull a while longer
Let them sleep awhile more
Its cold anyways.
A Love
So right yet so wrong
What is left sits in tangles
A confusion neither is willing to attest
I give you
the ending to a story began long ago
Behind blue eyes
Author notes
Tossed aside like nothing matters anymore, only once can I take the deceit and lies. So I say now.
~Synonymous--woman scorned
http://lryiu.deviantart.com/art/By-the-rivers-dark-29614323
A contest entry
- Broken promisses... by Wolf Mistress.
1200 points, ended February 23, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow...I loved the picture and your words were going along with it and with your explanation very well...
I loved the way as if you spoke to someone...I always love that in a poem...
Good luck in my contest
XXJeannette
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thank you
So very much for your kind words. I just began to write, I needed an outlet for all my pain.
This seems to do it for me
Thanks again
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