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Awake but Not Really There

Halfway there
mocks the Wednesday Sun
Alarms blare
It's begun

Author notes

An accidental rhyme...really

A contest entry

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  • a-modern-day-Juliet
    January 30, 2008
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    me like

    is this about school????? if it is i know how you feel......


  • Kiddy
    January 30, 2008
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    I like this one...
    Best of luck...

    -Kiddy

  • smiledownsoldier
    January 25, 2008
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    i am impressed.


  • crimsondew
    January 23, 2008
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    Good insight....
    Congrats on the bronze!


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 23, 2008

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    Hump day is what we call Wednesday. Your poem gives a glance into the importance of that day. Good job. I like the rhyme, too. Shancy.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 23, 2008
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    good luck
    i like this


  • February Moon gold member
    January 23, 2008
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    Beautiful.

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