morning has departed;
only the crows caw
in his wake.
A contest entry
- Quickie PIF by Lady Australis.
600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love how you chose to write about crows. I mean, if you wrote robin instead it just wouldn't work.
This one gives me an eery, dusty-western type feel. Don't ask me why. 
You are the queen of short poetry 
Jeanette*~
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awww, you're commenting on all my old stuff, hehe. thanks for all the comments; i want to read more of your stuff, but i'm writing a contest entry right now and watching branagh's hamlet because i'm beyond bored. mmmmmm shakespeare.
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nice job with this!
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this is nicly done
good luck -
Nicely done.
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