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Dark Eyes



Watch your eyes..
  Fading.
Shifting dawn in your dim eyes.




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  • GypsyEyes
    January 23, 2008
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    i like this one!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 23, 2008
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    Well done.


  • February Moon gold member
    January 23, 2008
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    I like it.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 23, 2008
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    very nice
    good luck


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 23, 2008
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    Good luck!

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