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Beams In Motion

Rotated radiance
not dimmed by cruel gray
shines elsewhere
always

Author notes

shifting dawn

A contest entry

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    this is a powerful and fantastic take on the prompt really captures it well done and congrats on the honorable


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 24, 2008
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    A fantastic delve into the prompt! Very well penned! Much more than mentionable...


  • crimsondew
    January 23, 2008
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    Like the grim note here..done beautifully..congrats on the HM!


  • GypsyEyes
    January 23, 2008
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    this was pretty Fantastic!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 23, 2008
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    Great Take Good Luck


  • February Moon gold member
    January 23, 2008
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    You're amazing.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 23, 2008
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    very nice
    good luck


  • Nicotine Eyes
    January 23, 2008
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    Thanks. Good luck to you as well

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