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One Sided Love

Her love doesn't dwindle from the harsh verbal beatings
Her smiles don't cease from the darkness of his eyes

He pushes her away
She doesn't care
She will still love him

As hard as he may try
She still sticks with him
She loves him

She doesn't care what he does
Or says to her
She still has hope in one sided love

Author notes

well that was interesting...and
i hope you cheer up
in the most down of situations light will always find a way through!
i'm only 14 but know what it's like to feel really down. but hope always finds a way
pandora's box says so

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  • greatperhaps
    January 27, 2008

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    ohhhhhhhhhh is this in a contest?? it doesn't do the where it's entered thingy!!! But good luck in the contest! I really like this poem! I think most people have been in a situation like this before and need something upbeat to think about!


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    January 24, 2008
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    very sad, and rather deep. Thanks for entering!