the moon weeps
as she falls from glory;
Lucifer's curse.
A contest entry
- Quickie PIF by Lady Australis.
600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Intresting... Dark and fabulous. And I loved the connection between the title and poem.
Gotta say it... I'm addicted to your poetry now.
~Cassie
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As I to yours.
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Great Short Poem
I like the imagery of a fall from glory and of a moon weeping at such a curse. Nice!
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Fantastic
Congrats on the HM
.♥.
Stay safe
~Manda
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Amazing!
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i love that last line! never thought of it like that!
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wow, talk about mastery of short poetry. Dark and powerful, nice!
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Nice Write Sweety. Good Luck
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I like dark.
Nicely done.
Darn devil! hehe
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dark awsome
goodluck -
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You too.
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