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A New Tomorrow

The day that we all long for, the day we never see.
The day that's just around the corner,
waitng on nothing except for me.
The day of the lonely, and the mourner,
The day I know I'll live again.
Tomorrow, the day that's never today.
Because today is only pain.
Tomorrow. The day that never came.

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityXx
    August 21, 2008
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    I really like this great write, amazing flow terffic rhyming skills you have here and my favorite lines were"Tomorrow, the day that's never today.
    Because today is only pain.
    Tomorrow. The day that never came."
    Keep up the good work and keep writting =]]]