Calm Eddy,
gently swirls,
against the murky bank.
Babbling echo's,
flowing roils,
caress tympanic membranes.
Roll cast,
Line Trues,
fly, alights upon the film.
Salmonid Rises,
snatching hackle,
Hah! Gotcha!
Author notes
I Love Fly Fishing, when I retire I will do it every day.
A contest entry
- - Keep It Simple, Dream Big - by Arkbear.
300 points, ended January 26, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What do you wish you were doing right now? by strangerforeigner.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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An honest citique is well accepted
Comments
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This poem is just cool! I love the imagery, how you paint a rich picture with sparing words. I hope you catch enough to feed everyone in your family for the rest of their lives!
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wonderful
my husband flyfishes..and i love to watch him..it is very relaxing..what a wonderful write to honor your favorite pastime..thanx so much for sharing..and best of luck in the contest..
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Nice ~
Both my sons took up fly-fishing last vacation....they are addicted now...hehe ~
Love your play on words and imagery....a nice dream for sure DR ~
Bear ~
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Realist dream.
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Best wishes in the contest!
And in your pursuit of fishing your life away!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Nice work Mark! Hope you win the contest!!
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A great piece, best of luck with it
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Good luck.
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What a sweet dream
All the best!
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