Well done! I liked all four! I wrote one, too!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by Poetic Soldier 3830949
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Great poem! I enjoyed the read!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by hoodoolover 3832139
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Great poem! Congratulations on receiving Honorable Mention and winning points for your poem!
<3 Maureen
"The Silence Swayed" written by tomisb 3832663
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I enjoyed your poem! Good Luck in the contest! Thanks for commenting on my poem!
<3 Maureen *rose"
"Sway" written by melphleg 3830861
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Unique composition! Enjoyed this! Love the picture! Good Luck in the contest!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by SilverButterfly 3830693
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I like the rhythm of your poem! You met the challenge well!
Good Luck in the contest!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by Valkyrie of Mercy 3830513 aka Little Shakespeare
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Sensual poem...I enjoyed!!!
Good Luck in the contest!<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by Ephiphany 3830545
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Your poem is similar to mine (we both thought of a couple swaying to a dance).
Good Luck in the contest!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by Delicate Fire Water 3830455
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I enjoyed your poem..I, too, thought of swaying while dancing. I like the way you ended the poem, too!
Good Luck in the contest!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by Heavenly Angel 3830429
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Good entry to Renee's contest! Good Luck!
<3 Maureen
"Don't Sway This Way" written by misticmoonlite 3830419
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Interesting poem! Minor problem: should be it's such as it's time to move (second line) it's about sharing mistakes (eighth line) it's about forgiving one's self (ninth line) one's heart (tenth line)
Good Luck in the contest!
<3 Maureen
"Sway" written by earthstar 3830331
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Good Luck in the contest! (comment made for contest)
Maureen
"Sway" written by Maureen 3831333
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