children play in poppy fields,
disfigured by fire;
mother's still see them
on asylum walls.
Author notes
"Don't let the truth get in the way of your lies"
By ClearlyManipulating at deviantart.com
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/15/20 Quickie by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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dark. short. fantastic. :]
congrats on the gold, most def. XD -
Well this is quite short what you have written here, and very thought-provoking actually! You have managed to get some great imagery inside as well, and I like that
Well done - thank you for entering the contest!
Leander -
Congrats on the gold!
A chilling yet very unique piece. Very well penned indeed. I love the abstract theme. Best of luck in the contest with it
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Wow, how sad is this?
This most certainly deserved the gold it won. 
~Cassie
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Beautiful. Abstract and yes as the others said, a different take on the prompt. Thanks very much!
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Different take good imagery
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Yikes!!! I think you may have scared me with this piece! Very original....Love where you took this!
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Great take.
Oh that's a cool pic. heheh
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Wow! This is such scary yet
well thought out piece for this
prompt! Well done and all the
best to you with this one in the
contest! Thanks for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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