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Factory Burns

 

 

children play in poppy fields,

disfigured by fire;

mother's still see them

on asylum walls.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

"Don't let the truth get in the way of your lies"
By ClearlyManipulating at deviantart.com

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A contest entry

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Comments

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  • SpiceRack
    March 17
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    dark. short. fantastic. :]
    congrats on the gold, most def. XD

  • leander Moderators member
    February 14

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    Well this is quite short what you have written here, and very thought-provoking actually! You have managed to get some great imagery inside as well, and I like that

    Well done - thank you for entering the contest!
    Leander

  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 11

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    Congrats on the gold!

    A chilling yet very unique piece. Very well penned indeed. I love the abstract theme. Best of luck in the contest with it

  • And Hyetal
    January 26

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    Wow, how sad is this? This most certainly deserved the gold it won.

    ~Cassie


  • Midnight-x-Rose silver member
    January 23
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    Beautiful. Abstract and yes as the others said, a different take on the prompt. Thanks very much!

  • Talloaks silver member
    January 23
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    Different take good imagery


  • jcat gold member
    January 23
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    Yikes!!! I think you may have scared me with this piece! Very original....Love where you took this!


  • Cerulean gold member
    January 23
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    Great take.
    Oh that's a cool pic. heheh


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 23

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    Wow! This is such scary yet
    well thought out piece for this
    prompt! Well done and all the
    best to you with this one in the
    contest! Thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826
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