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Softly Killing

This room driving me insane
Nothing I can feel but pain
Nothing of me left to drain
It’s like a pathetic forest in a drought
There are no feelings left its all torn out
Nothing left but insanity
This insanity is softly killing me
So subtly the fiendish hand
In this world all so bland
Blow out my fire in icy rain
Nothing left of me but an immoral stain

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  • KiddSick
    January 27, 2008

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    short but right to the point,convays alot of emotion that is held up inside