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[ Mom you know I love you ]

Mom you know I love you
You are there when I fall
Even it seems that the worlds against me
You are there

I don't know what I would do

Without you there

I love everything you make

Because you make it with love

That pours into me

And fills me with joy

I love you

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  • eternal-devotion
    February 18, 2008
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    Very endearing.

    You sure do love your mom to write such a nice tribute to her. You seem to realise just how much love she has for you. You know that she is always there for you no matter what happens in your life it, would be nice if all young people had as much faith in thier moms as you have. Good poem I enjoyed reading it.


  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008
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    Absolutely sweet. Especially the lines "I love everything you make" to "That pours into me". Like molding you and trying to help you grow into a beautiful person... What a lovely tribute to your mom. I enjoyed the read.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    This is a great poem on a mother's love,
    one that you have place out there for all to see.
    Best of luck to you.


  • Mujina
    February 5, 2008
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    Motherly love..... so sweet... I like this poem.... Thank you for entering and good luck.

  • eatmydirt
    February 4, 2008
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    thats such ahappy poem I really love it


  • Dancing the Rumba
    January 27, 2008
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    This is very sweet. I love the love that comes pouring out of it! Great job,
    V

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