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Gold, Bronze - Through The Window - BG (in contest) (ends June 10th)

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Through the window,
a willow tree basks,
in the morning sun.
Its boughs sway gingerly,
with a slight breeze,
of an oncoming storm.

Delicate blades,
of green grass,
whip around angrily.
Shaking off the chill,
of spring nights,
and cloak of dew.

The atmospheric pressure pushes
clouds beneath along,
and spring tears in the distance,
caress the ground.
As well as,
sending succulent aroma,
of neighbors apple orchard,
clumsily my way.

The old shingles begin,
to flap as the wind grows stronger,
and I withdraw from the window.
Wrapping myself tightly,
in my morning robe,
I retire to the kitchen,
for some coffee.

Thence enjoying the
sweet sound of music...

Wrote January 23, 2008


http://allpoetry.com/contest/2387547

Word Bank Prompt
Grass/Cloth/Shingles/Window/Beneath/Blade/Aroma/

Color-green/Sweet-delicate/Gentle-gingerly/Cry-tears/
Thunder-angry/Spicy-succulent

I used these two prompts.

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  • Midnight-x-Rose silver member
    June 18
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    Beautiful imagery, works so lovely against the background, very pure and spiritually calming.

  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    April 27

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    nicely penned and enjoyed some of your descriptive lines, very unique and made for a very nicely penned write Thank you for entering your poem and good luck in the contest


  • creationsfromheart silver member
    January 23
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    This is amazing

    An execellent write full of imagery and great useage of the words, This is written with Dignity and style, I love every punctuation mark you have! I actually got the words from looking out my window this morning while the cool air was blowing, you created a wonderful write!

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