between trailing strands her skin is moonlit
in this midnight
this life was one
written in footprints,
spelt out
by the sheer tread of rubber soles
through weightless mornings
& dust-dragged afternoons
– life is
stencilled over sine waves,
as predictable as butterflies and –
(against the cliché) – just
as meaningless
‘mistakable’
slides sinuous over pupils
undilated
with attention ~
(because light is oh so wearing
on the soul)
Author notes
1st = (to paint in purple & pressurepoints)
2nd = Transcendent
3rd = Vivisection
4th = Clouds & Glowing Shadows
5th = Shadow
That was fun ^.^ (a recycle-poem)
A contest entry
- Piece by Piece by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended February 3, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You made the parts of this work wonderfully together. I wouldn't have guessed these were recycled words if not for the premise of this contest. lol. Thank you for the entry. Stunning imagery in this one.
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it works really well
and proves there is coherency and continuitty in all that we do - or perceive we do
good stuff
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