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Wished Wishes

I have no wishes to be granted my way
I will wish to have wishes granted today
To all those who hold dear wishes true
Divine and purpose who need it too
For light and love these wishes be wished
Placed forever amongst those stars kissed
Here is to the keeper of wishes, I have found
Lucky charms and clovers, this field abounds
Magic lamps and dandelions, to rub and blow
miracles of wishes that which you bestow
Horse shoes and rabbit’s tail, they have near
for all their wishes in their hearts are held here
Within dreams and wells, pennies are dropped
May all these wished wishes never be stopped

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  • vici377
    February 3, 2008

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    wonderful

    what a wonderfully lyrical write...great flow..love the ending...may all these wished wishes never be stopped..very well said..thanx so much for sharing and congrats on the honorable...blessed be


  • poppa
    January 23, 2008
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    forgot to mention....love the photo...its a great pic..

  • poppa
    January 23, 2008

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    Good stuff

    What a lovely thought, granting wishes for all......nice write, flows well and simple yet effective rhyming........nice piece


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    January 23, 2008

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    Very pretty verse...wondrful wishes!!! Best of luck in the contest and thanks for the entry!!!

    Az