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Have you ever truely loved?

Have you ever truely loved?
Loved with a passion, maybe.
But have you ever truely loved?
Loved with commitment, never to leave?
Some how I highly dought.
All we do is "love" with passion,
What is special about that?
I won't always 'love' you,
But I will always love you.
I will commmit to stand by you,
In sickness and health,
If just as a friend, even so,
I must commit, if I don't,
Then at one fight we will no longer speak.
And so I say to you,
Love with the love that is greater than all.
Never let go of those to which you say,
"I love you."
Are these not the most powerful words?
Do not sling them around,
Use them with great care.

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The only way to love with committment is to love in God.

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  • CoveredInTheBlood
    January 30, 2008

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    This is actually a topic that i have been, for lack of better word, pondering over the last couple of weeks. Nice to know that there's somebody else with the same thoughts.


  • Tarja
    January 23, 2008

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    A bit too... Bryan Adams for my taste... not to say it's bad though.
    TYPOS:
    Have you ever truely loved?
    But have you ever truely loved?
    Some how I highly dought


    • Red Rose of Light
      January 26, 2008

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      thank you for the honesty, but a) I wasn't finished, and b ) It wasn't a typo I meant to do that. thanks for the comment.