I can't breath
Through all the tears
The Pain's unbearable
I must be unlovable
I feel this
Every night
Always fighting
No give or gain
I'm trying to cry
But all that escapes
Are gasps for breath
And sorrow
Spilling out
As my eyes flood over
Only one thing left to do
I find the blade
It's cool on my flesh
I draw it back
To let the sorrow flow
Red sorrowflows faster than clear
Then the sorrows race each other
I can't deal
any longer
My only friend
Betrayed me once
He made this scare
Over my heart
He only missed by a fraction
Not this time
I aim well
He feels sharp
On my bare chest
I thrust him deep
Then all goes red
Author notes
NOT about me i very rarely write about myself but somehow it all ends up emo (well most)
A contest entry
- Abstract PW allowed by BigE.
400 points, ended February 16, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - it's alarming how loud the silence screams-- by noir eyes.
300 points, ended March 2, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any good? sorry i tend to write emo-ish but not about me
Comments
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Very good write.
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very nicely penned.
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