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Past The Point of No Return

The trap has been set
It lies in wait

She comes now
Come, sing your song

She joins in your song
The trap has been sprung

She sings to you
You watch from afar

Your voices join again
You are now, forever more

Past The Point of No Return

Author notes

This is based upon the international phenomenon, The Phantom of The Opera. This piece of mine, is of course, based on the scene of the song, 'Past The Point of No Return.' Enjoy.

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  • sneakers
    June 21
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    this is great! keep up the great work!


  • CatyBrie.
    October 2, 2008

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    =] great work.
    you might want to watch your pronouns, because i'm pretty sure you have "your" refering to more than one person/thing.
    =] But Really. Great Job. I Freaking Love The Phantom Of The Opera.