She's screaming in silence
her voice is deafening
But no one's listening
Nobody looks up from their work.
She's in pain
Her chest is hollowed
Her emotions are spilling out on the floor
Nobody notices, nobody cares.
She's trying so hard to smile
Everything's been stolen from her
It's as if her mouth's been sewed shut
And her souls been drained
She loves the boy.
The boy doesn't know
She gave up her heart for him
She fucked up everything.
A contest entry
- silent screams we make by moonburndcheese.
300 points, ended February 4, 2008, 34 entries
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i really like this poem and i feel like i can relate... thank you for entering in my contes
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Why thank you :]
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I can relate to this... I've been that girl... I've been in love and screming in side but that wasn't because he didn't know but also because he didn't love me back. Koodles on a great poem
Blessed be
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thanks
I'm glad you liked it.
I didn't know how to end it though. He knows I like him and stuff...but things got really screwed up last night between us. But I just choose to use that as my last stanza.
I appreciate your Koodles
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AMAZING
Its almost as if this poem is about me....but I know its not. Its probably about you. But it just reminds me so much about what it was like when I was going through my anxiety and panic attacks. It felt like everything had been stolen from me, and like my mouth was sewen shut. I couldnt speak, I couldnt breath, and no one gave a fuck. I wish i could say this poem was about me...but its not...its only a remeberence...but u and I seem alike.
see you around
-The anxiety freak
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