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God's Dancing Angel

She was beautiful, loving, and full of grace.
She loved to dance at any pace.
She floated, she flew,
She lit up every room.
One day this girl whom everyone loved
went to the heavens far far above.
She now is an angel who dances for God,
I'll miss her truly I will, but
I will never forget
the angel who could dance every problem away.
I will always love God's dancing angel.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Sounds as if this really was a great dancer on earth, and I am sure she is dancing above too. Sentiments well expressed in these lines; easy to read and understand as well.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    What a beautiful dedication

    I am sure this angel must be smiling ear to ear to hear
    this beautifully written poem.
    good good job!
    ears/Seattle.