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You

Hey you,
Yes you,
Reading this,
I know you are

You,
Have learned so much,
Whilst experiencing
So very little.

You,
Will ultimately
pay the price
For your sins.

You,
Unwitting accomplice,
Will pay the price
For the sins of others.

You,
Will find new strength
In those long forgotten
Lost to the sands of time.

You,
Will find these truths
To be self-evident
That all men are created equal.
(But minds are not)

You,
Will learn that you're
Not all you thought you were
All this time.

You,
Will discover your rights
To be lefts, and your triumphs,
Well.. they'll still be triumphs.

You, yes you,
Will learn that life isn't
Just what's in front of you,
But what's behind, and beside.

Now you,
Don't forget to look both ways
(and backwards)
Before you cross the street,
Cuz the drivers don't look for you.
(And it only takes a second)

Author notes

Kinda ho-hum. I've had this idea for a while, but it didn't turn out as well as I'd hoped. C'est la vie, I suppose.
-Kevin

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  • dreamsxcalling
    January 23, 2008
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    An interesting kind of omniscient viewpoint. Kinda funky, kinda cool.