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Aging as One

Through the years
of sweat and tears,
wishes and dreams begin to appear;
begin to blossom
with time and age,
pulling hearts forever near...

Lives are settled
and becoming content,
comfortable together as one;
memories building
of the past together,
awaiting the future unknown...

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  • paullallady silver member
    January 26

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    This is an amazing piece of poetry,
    and reminds me of an anniversary as
    two look back at their lives together.
    great job on this.

  • aboomer silver member
    January 23

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    Very lovely wording. I like this. Wording, images and emotion are really good and it reads nicely. And it so true....two build memories together and age together facing the unknown...together.
    well done.