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I am ok or maybe not

I am OK with
all your dirty laundry.
I am not OK with
all these lies you told.
I would rather be OK
with what life gave me.
But instead I am not
OK with it at all.

I am ashamed of
being OK with you.
Although you told
me I am OK, I know
I am not OK.
As the tears fall down
from heaven I am telling
you I am not OK.

You gave me all this
heartache how could
i be OK.
I AM OK OR MAYBE NOT.

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i LISTENED TO MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE-I'M NOT OK

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  • Florida Sunshine gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    I luv that band ~ so maybe that is why I liked this ~ Nice job ~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you

  • seasonsoflove
    February 19, 2008
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    If I don't have your name by Feb. 24, the contest is ending and i will DQ you. I don't want to do that, but I cant give you the award I was planning to give you if i don't know if you were in my last contest... I am really sorry about it if I have to DQ this... its an awesome peice...

  • seasonsoflove
    February 13, 2008
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    i need to know who this is or i will have to DQ it... please message me or reply to this comment... either way, please let me know. this is a great poem, but i dont know if you were in my other contest...

  • seasonsoflove
    February 1, 2008
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    I only just realized, you forgot to put your user name... just thought I should let you know...
    ~rocklover91

  • seasonsoflove
    January 24, 2008

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    I was hoping that someone would use this song... this is really good! nice job and best of luck in this contest!
    ~rocklover91

  • brittany.geeze
    January 23, 2008
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    i love the song by my chem but i think you could have made this poem a lot better.
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