My heart does ache,
when I look in the past.
But it is our future,
that will surely last.
So this I say..
"If love is true,
please take my hand,
so I can find it with YOU!"
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this is wonderful
a short verse in so few words, and filled with heart, you took few words and built a future, just wonderful!
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Aww, again so sweet!! Such lovely flow to this softly romantic piece. Lucky lady!
Sigh... we should all love to have something as this written for us!
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*tears* This truly beautiful, who ever you wrote this for is truly blessed to have you! Oh yea, I loved the way it flowed, BRAVO my friend!
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Just beautiful. I don't see a problem with your writing.
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you romantic you
beautiful sentiment...bet she's beautiful
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Lovely and graceful with a beautiful flow.
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