Carefully placed boredom showing upon her face.
She loves knowing
the irresistible image she is
reflecting.
It makes her grin inside.
Through the gray of the day
she stands out, a green goddess.
Secret vanity is being fed,
voracious hound is she, gobbling it up.
Every catcall and whistle feeding
her confidence(consciousness?).
She'll be back tomorrow for another 'unveiling'.
An attention junkie always needs a fix.
In a list
A contest entry
- pic contest by Dark Whispers.
425 points, ended January 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very smart
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very smar
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I LOVED THIS!
YAY YOU!
This was nice. Short, to the point.
Beautiful.
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Very good
This is a really nice short story that says it all. Great idea and wonderfully written.
Terry
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This poem is indeed very clever. Before looking at the prompt picture, I thought of a flower that opens and close with the sunlight and lack thereof, and to my surprise, that is what I found when I did take a peek. LOL Excellent! Very inventive. Shows off your creativity with a flare. The best to you in the contest.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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I had to go look at the contest to see the pic...once I did that I was able to better see how your poem dealt with it. Very good! Glad I clicked. I can almost see her self-satisfied grin
good job
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I've known people like that. Your poem put it to words perfectly!
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applaud this
Very good stuff . Good luck to you always
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very adorable
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wonderful!!! awesome take from the picture prompt, good luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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