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desire needs

careful elegance
pristine and tasteful

lure me in
stir with longing

warm my soul
enchant my heart

fill my sinful lust
taken with love . .

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picture prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2387/146.jpg?1201099750

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  • BellaD
    January 28, 2008

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    Succinct and powerful poetry. I like the subtle way you linked your words to the picture prompt..."stir with longing" "taken with love" Brilliant!