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Beautiful one

I love your smile whenever you do smile.
Sorry I don't talk to much but whenever I try to my stomach feels up with butterflies.
Sometimes I feel like I'm lost in the woods trying to find my way out.
Running in circles looking at the stars and mistake them for your beautiful eyes.

Please tell me what you think

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  • movedon
    May 26, 2008
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    The last line was wonderful. Well done on such an effective write!!
    Mylee


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    May 9, 2008
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    awwwww wow this is a sweet poem. short but so sweet.


  • maralisa silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    a beautiful poem running in circles looking at the stars and mistake them for your beautiful eyes


  • Carramao21
    January 23, 2008
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    I really loved it