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Pink Ribbon…



Pink ribbon , please don’t be lost
There will be warm days ,as days of frost.
After a screetchy darkness, in every splendid sunbeam
you”ll  stay as pearly as ever, reclaiming your lavender sheen.


The world may want to rip you apart, in million shreds
tie you in suffocating knots, and cut you into little threads.
You may be thrown in a filthy drain,
left lying in dirt or in some cruel rain.

The storm will want to blow you away ,
calloused  hands of time may cripple your sway,
But I know , throughout these drudgeries ,you have in your heart
a stupendous will, an untiring courage to make a new start .

Untieing the secret of gifts ,on some lovely dress’s flare
In a sweet lovers knot ,in a beauty’s hair
You’ll make your place and never be torn.
As a bearer of someone’s love ,you’ll always be reborn

Author notes

here is another one.my sister thinks this one is stupid bt anyways,i hope its gud enough.

I (Neha Chaudhary), hereby allow Mackerth to use my poem for the intended purpose.

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  • mackereth
    January 23, 2008
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    First of all, i would like to thank you for entering this contest, just by doing this, you are giving hope to everyone that this has affected. Wow, the symbols within this poem are amazing, the flow is a little off, but it doesn't really affect the message. Thank you again for your entry, and good luck in the contest.