Today,
I wished the mirror were water
so that I could reach in,
grab hold of the girl inside
and mould her
into
maybe perfection.
But then I hear
unsaid words
like rice on plate saying,
"Accept what you have,"
and when I agreed
I dug a deeper frequency
and wanted to mould
who she was
instead of what she was
into
maybe my ideal
and let the impurities
flow away with the current
just because
I wanted to be
an artist.
A contest entry
- FROM MIND TO SOUL...spoken verse by LadyLavender.
600 points, ended January 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your thoughts, if I may ask? :)
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beautiful. Strong and well written.
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thank you! glad you liked it!
bless ya!
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Exemplary
this is beautiful, such a strong message, i too am lost for words, i love it.
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lol.. thanks!
bless ya!
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wow this is an amazing writ which has left me speechless your words are powerfully used and express alot within thenm well done and best of luck hun
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sweet of you.. i really appreciate your words.
thank you!
bless ya!
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i love this. there is such a depth of emotion.
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thank you! great to know you enjoyed it!
bless ya!
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