I wish I was a person
Instead of a ghost
I tore off my arms
To deliver your post
Over dramatic?
Certifiably Insane?
Is it natural to hate life?
Then natures to blame.
Natures disaster,
Cold on a hot day
Dry and curled up in the rain.
Death in my stomach
Digests a message of pain
My ears talk to me
"break free from this chain"
Love stares at me again.
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wow
The use of words, and the image it gave was pretty awesome. I like it alot.
-starre_mary-
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wow. i really have no words to say for this poem cuz i'm speechless.
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this was absolutely amazing...it truely left me speechless. the emotions in this poem were very powerful.
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Okay-this is fuckin'awesome! it was-like-WOW!
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This is sad, yet not. It leaves a mix of such sttrong emotions. Once again, amazing job, you should never stop writing. Keep it up.
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you're absolutely an amazing poet.. and i've read a few others but they leave me wordless. Therefore, i've found the best i could to comment on! I really like this one, the rhyme scheme is really cool, and the message is really awesome.
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"Is it natural to hate life?
Then natures to blame" are my fav lines
but i know how you feel i've been there mayself many times before but keep up the good work
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good write
this is amazingly written i love it -
great
keep it up
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as depression poems go
this is there
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My favorite lines are :
I tore off my arms
To deliver your post
Over dramatic?
Certifiably Insane?
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I love that! Keep writing
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koolio...
'Is it natural to hate life?
Then natures to blame.'
love those lines..
keep it up, and may your ink never dry
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