5pm romance
5pm romance so perfectly timed
just finished work
got love on my mind
Rush Hours started
No cars around
Can just hear my heart
pound after pound
As the sun rises
my beat goes down
when will I see you
more time with you strived,
9am tip toes
see you at five.
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aww this is so sweet i love it
this poem is by far the best i've read is so sweet and romantic i love it keep up your wonderfully brillient poems keep writing i love it
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Beautiful.
This is so cute.
A short poem but powerful, it leaves the reader in a happy daze.
I love the lines :
Can just hear my heart
pound after pound
full of honesty and beauty.
I also love the rhyme in this, it really helps with the flow of the piece.
Well done, another beautiful poem =]
Arc-En-Ciel--x
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love it
shot but to the point. i like it alot
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OMFG! this was like so- i dont know the word to describe it! i loved it! its great!
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That was amazing.
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So cute!!! your did a great job!! The rythme of the and flow as always are just amazing! I love it! Good job!
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this is very cute and romantic. I would have swooned if a guy had written something like this for me. Don't pay any attention to people who say not to rhyme.
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Thought are the best aren't they? Know what's even more romantic? Five AM romance.
They beat the hell out of PM! <3
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ohhh i like it =]
tis very cute
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How sweet. Beautifully penned from your inner heart.
Rush Hours started
No cars around
Can just hear my heart
pound after pound...
...and I just can't wait
reading more of you poems
day after day
i shall look forward
to seeing you
around especially
at 5PM where I am free
to read some poems...Rose Tattoo
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sweet
i liked how most of the stanzas rhymed
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This poem is cuter than the rest of your "depressingerrr" poems... I like it. You write depressing and adorable poems just as well...!
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