Insignificant,
you didn't even notice me
Fading into the background.
Much as a chameleon mixes with
it's surroundings.
However, i do not feel 'one'
with the universal laws.
I feel invisible.
How can i reach out,
when no one sees my transparent
supplications, arms open so wide;
they could engulf you whole.
Hiding my aching hunger
Failing miserably,
especially when i see your face.
Ah, my fascination why?
Must i become mute?
Unable to spill my heart
whenever you near?
Beguiled and lost,
never to be same shape and
texture
as at the moment before
I glimpsed you true.
All others faded into nothingness.
Author notes
I chose nothingness... and how when we're around people we have 'crushes' on.. we often feel like this ,
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Great
i love this!!! i can totally relate, and alot of other people probly can two
great good, and 5 stars on the poem <3
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I think the puppy analogy draws attention away from the meaning of the poem Everything else is deep and has a rich meaning, but I think the poem would be much better without it. The rest is very well thought out and the emotion runs off the page. Great write!
love
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wow
i know that feeling. Great write!!!
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I dont have a thing to say, for once!
Peace,
Jin
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I feel that it started out a little juvenile, but it became stronger the more that I read. Your message was too easily sighted within your word usage, but I did feel a tugging between love and hate by the time I finished. Emotionally, it was very well thought out.
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kool poem... good meaning!
pleasure reading
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Wow
Quite a deep read ... the first stanza really pulls the reader in and makes them want to re-read this again and again.
I felt so compelled by all the emotions as I read this
Great write
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Stay safe
~Manda
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