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Turn down the volume

You know me
So turn down the volume
And pretend to listen
While I scream.

I’m breaking at the seams
And all the joints are aching
With this hate inside of me.

I want you to go.

Bring me a bottle.
And make sure its full
Of nothing but the hate inside your heart.

Let me drink it all.

Let me finish this.

Please tell me what you think

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    January 23, 2008
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    awesome. really felt the emotion of anger and pain and hate. well done!!


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 23, 2008

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    Wow, this is such a powerful poem. I really enjoyed this. I could feel the anger and hate coming through so strong in this poem. Well done.