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Two birds

Two birds together,
flying high above.
We soar to the future,
the past really gone.
We fly in unison
forever more..
High above all the hurt,
from long before.







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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 26, 2008

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    Sometimes a hard thing to do to fly above the pains and hurt... I shall aspire to this!

    Said a lot in a few words...


  • CherryOnTop
    January 23, 2008

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    I always wanted to be a bird. Just for this reason.You have penned this one perfectly.your imagery is superb.


  • pappacass
    January 23, 2008

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    nice bro

    the rhyme was a little off but i liked the content.
    and don't get pissed i said that...people say it to me all the time..lol


  • I will stand by you
    January 23, 2008
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    this is a great piece of work. Really I wish more people would leave the past in the past. It would help. Keep up the good work.