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I See You

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 I look at the clouds,
the sky,
the moon,
the stars,
And I see you

I look at the hills
the fields,
the forest,
the ocean,
And I see you

I look at our home,
our garden,
our flowers,
our trees,
And I see you

Wherever I look
You are there

Filling my life
With love

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    March 13, 2008

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    This touched me deep in to my soul. I am sorry for your loss. But the love you had for this woman oh it shows! Thank you for sharing such a heart wrenching poem with us. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    She must have beamed with pride

    when she read this heartfelt poem!
    That was a wonderful dedication to your wife!
    lovely poem poet lovely poem to honor her!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen/Seattle.


  • twaintwine
    February 6, 2008
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    Love as Big as a House?

    This is a very sweet poem...but if I picture a woman as the object of affection, she would have to be a very large woman! Ha Ha! Perhaps you are referring to a more spiritual object of affection? I enjoyed this! Aloha, my friend!


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 5, 2008
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    Sweet tribute...

  • Dobar Dan
    January 26, 2008

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    WOW - Lucky Lady

    This is a beautiful poem - what more can I say - you have expressed yourself beautifully - I'm from B.C. Canada - you are in Australia - wow - we are Blessed ehhh? - Bless You - and Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan)

  • Climbing2nothing
    January 24, 2008

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    yeah nicely layered fractal vision, the way the now of love empties the mind of doubt and tangled thought is amazing isn't it?, iv recently fallen into the garden myself and i too see her everywhere, in roadside grass, in sunsets, even in shadow yet the light she will always be and so for your very adoring script (i thought your name and photo were classic so i had to have a look) i thank and bless

    w oranges and pinneaple
    -JAS


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 23, 2008

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    Hello Avery, I must say this was such a delight to read this morning. I can feel the love and devotion you have for your beautiful wife. It is refreshing to read how love should be. Thank you for sharing this beautiful heartfelt poem. God Bless you both. Sandy


  • Tattboyspet
    January 23, 2008

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    What a wonderful dedication
    I am certain that your other half knows just how much she means to you and that the feeling is mutual


  • Angelic Princess21
    January 23, 2008

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    this is beautiful. very nice imagery thanks for sharing this beautiful write. keep up the amazing work.

    Angel (babygirl)

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