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Mother in Waiting



Expectant mother
Walking under full moon
Heart beats sweet musings
Baby in womb swimming to shores
Bedecked earth welcomes
With arms stretched towards it.

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 23, 2008

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    This is such a lovely poem and the title is so perfect for this. I really enjoyed the last two lines. It really finished this poem off wonderfully. All the best for the contest.