Live a dream,
Take a star,
search your mind,
watching from afar.
Hold me close,
want to scream,
erase those scars,
at the seam.
Just let me be,
Hug me tight,
had enough of
my wishing fight.
A contest entry
- Wish On A Falling Star!!! by SummerlandRayne.
799 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
...yeah it sucks so..
Comments
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WOW
this had really good rythm to it nice poem -
Some painful feelings...I believe the stars hear all wishes...happy or sad. Many of mine suck as well. Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest!!!
Az


