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Down

Live a dream,
Take a star,
search your mind,
watching from afar.

Hold me close,
want to scream,
erase those scars,
at the seam.

Just let me be,
Hug me tight,
had enough of
my wishing fight.

A contest entry

...yeah it sucks so..

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  • SHadowHex666
    January 23, 2008
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    WOW

    this had really good rythm to it nice poem


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    January 23, 2008

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    Some painful feelings...I believe the stars hear all wishes...happy or sad. Many of mine suck as well. Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest!!!

    Az