Waiting, bounded
punishment staggered,
fear yet desire
Master takes His time.
A pleasurable sting
caresses my arse,
heart pounding,
my breath quickens.
Sensations dance
upon my body.
Skin glistens,
my sweet dew
dripping.
Author notes
This was pic inspired for a pic contest, I can't upload the pic or seem to be able to place the link, however if you go to contest the pic is there.
A contest entry
- Part III of Friday's BDSM Series (Picture Contains Nudity) by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 25, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Captive of your own joy
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A FINE PIECE, INDEED!
Short, sweet, sensual - and straight to the heart of the matter! A very stimulating, erotic, and sensational piece - to say the least! This is just what the doctor ordered before retiring for the evening
Love and Peace to you and Master Ktulu!
Earl.
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Thank you for your comment, and I hope you sweet dreams
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How charming!...
"Sensations dance
Upon my body
Skin glistens
My sweet dew
Dripping"
I'd like to taste the sweet dew...lol...joking
You're great...really great...sweet mistress!..
It's a beautiful erotica...and I love this erotica...and I love you too..awesome lady!
Kissesss!
Galaxy2
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A very short yet erotic piece with pleasurable imagery tantalizing the senses of the reader
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Beauty in it's simplest forms
ALAS! My eyes deceive me! A post? From zee talented Mistress Rose? IN SUBBY POV?!?!?!?! *faints*
Honestly, you've shocked me in a very pleasant way, and I thank you, ^_^. Haven't seen the picture that inspired this beautiful piece, and I honestly don't need/want to. I am quite content with the image in my head,
. Tantalizingly brief, a mere glimpse of the exquisite moments soon to come. (Not really sure if that pun was intended or not, XP.)
You never fail to hold the reader's interest, and are always refreshingly unique. No redundance. Perfect in my eyes, ^_^. Thanks so much for sharing with us, and glad to see you are writing again. Hope to see more soon,.
~S.
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A simple snippet of the possible. Pointed and well presented. Thank you, this was lovely.
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my only objection...this was too short...LOL... I adored it..especially being the pet i am... peace and harmony... Desi
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Mistress..
This is definately a different write for You. To write from the subs POV....awesome job!
love You submissive lil bitch
Ktulu
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very sexy
"boundliked the pleasuable stin imageed" should be "bound"
liked the pleasurable sting image and dancing sensations image as well
did not get the glistening skin image. you can't see yourself. unless you put in some mirrors........ would be nice addition anyway..........
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