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Snowfall

Winter lays a shimmering cloak of ivory stardust
Upon the barren, frostbitten land,
Guilding faded, ashen memories of Summer in icy beauty.

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This is a pixiku.

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  • SEA angel gold member
    January 23, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is a winter wonderland of imagry and metaphor with a celebration of words from inner inspiration that collected in your thoughts and fell onto the page like snowflakes.