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Story of the Graves

 

 

a blackbird cries,

deceased expressions formed.

gravestones have intentions.

judged knights laugh,

moments never offered.

perfect questions,

risen secrets, topics untold.

visions whitewashed.

xystus, yards.

zeros.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • tarcus silver member
    February 4
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    Dark and warm, if your names dracular

  • Dragon Tamer
    February 1

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    Hmmmmm.....very interesting!

    This is an amazing piece you have created here, and it tells a great story, although a little on the dark/sad side of life.You have also added a new word to my vocabulary(Xystus), thank you very muchIf I had to pick a favorite verse, it would be a toss up between the 3rd and 4th lines.I honestly think this is a unique masterpiece and it's a winner in my eyes!
    Thank you for sharing this little tale with us and best of luck in the contest
    DT


  • flight
    January 24
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    The best one I've read so far!
    peace to all ~flight