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(Contest) Alphabet Soup

Aching breasts can dull each feeling
Good hearts in joke kill love
Men never open past quaint romance
Sex the ultimate victory

watching xenial your zealot

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WTF...

A contest entry

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  • tarcus
    February 4, 2008
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    nicely put


  • Dragon Tamer
    February 1, 2008

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    Heart breaking

    This is a cool piece you have written, yet it is so sad.Your 2nd, 3rd, & 4th verses have so much devastating truth to them
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts and talent with us and best of luck in the contest
    DT


  • LostInTheDream
    January 22, 2008

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    NICE!

    This is a great prompt isnt it? And you really used it well! I love this poem! Good luck in the contest...