Sticky nectar lay inside carnal drops,
born seedlings through Apis Mellifera,
conceived sighs bloom apart his femme fatale
by coming summer, with changing weather;
Her eyes shone plastic hearts’ reflections first,
Rosa tightly curling ‘round a stomach,
lightly curves peeled leaves in subtle sections
for all of whom, creased smiles won arching backs;
Ecstatic lips darted arousal past,
milky pressure pushing each fabric peak,
leisure’s sunshine kicked behind buttoned blouse
and beneath, stems grew digits between beats;
Their breathing, consummated, love.
Author notes
Note: to those that may know me, don't worry - I'm not having a baby. Not yet.
Be honest, I promise it won't hurt;
Comments
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Loved the plant/human metaphor
Well constructed poem
Keep on truckin
-Me
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I enjoyed seeing the changes, I liked "with changing weather" arr.... uh.
Your phrasing always seems novel every time I read it. "creased smiles won arching backs" I like this suggestive phrasing this isn't logically following, but it seems so plain. It's a mad scientist kinda poetic device, at least that's how I like to envision it.
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I am definitely impressed!
Great diction! I love your use of oft looked over words and the way you laced them together.
Superb!!!
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Thank-you. I've spent quite a bit of time rewriting it.
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