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Snowdrifts

crystals fall, shatter
against the freezing pavement
then come together

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just a simple haiku. Hope you like.

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  • Naridill
    January 24, 2008

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    simple and definitely effective. Love the form you choose. Very well crafted indeed.

    Thanks for entering,


  • DogFish silver member
    January 22, 2008
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    effective


  • Radiance
    January 22, 2008

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    I like the image conjured by this haiku. I think some of the best imagery is captured in the shortest pieces; this is a great example of that. Thank you for sharing it!