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Kissed by Rain

Raindrops
Are falling on
my head. I look toward the
sky and I feel so alive with
The feeling of heaven’s tears kissing my
Face with the love of an angel
Who hides in the sunset
to cry gentle
Raindrops.

Author notes

ricameter

this was written for cauldron (my shizzles @ school can see it when it comes out!) and I did this really cute drawing to it. :3 it's adorable! i plan to do more stuff like it.

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  • ucancallmereal
    May 10, 2008
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    awwwwwwwwwh how cute!!! i loved this so much its insane..


  • Wydra
    March 6, 2008
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    wow.very eye catching and a really powerful poem


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 23, 2008

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    amazing, that is what i think this is amazing, you have done a great job on this my friend, keep it flowing


  • Faeryn
    January 22, 2008

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    excellently done, Lise! I love:
    "Who hides in the sunset
    to cry gentle
    Raindrops."

    they are very moving lines. I wanna see the drawing to go with it!
    -Tay


    • riasme
      January 23, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment! I would love to send it to you! do you have an email?

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