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Workshop in Love

for Ernest,
who reminded me that Love
is a verb


felt-tip fingers verbs of blood
writing riddles, songs and poems
and whispers ... feathering
naked souls
tiptoe-ing nevertreaded paths
of doves
nesting in shadows
and in dreams

myra 2002

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Poetry Workshop!
Written February 3rd, 2002

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  • February 9, 2002
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    Came back to read again...superb, enchanting write...eh...oh...ee


  • myrataal silver member
    February 5, 2002
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    Oh yes C ... every poem is. Thank you for visiting.


  • February 5, 2002
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    poetry workshop eh :o)

  • myrataal silver member
    February 4, 2002
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    Thanks for chanting, Slagman!


  • February 4, 2002
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    Sorry about the duplication, Myra.


  • February 4, 2002
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    Superb, enchanting write.


  • February 4, 2002
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    Superb, enchantin write.

  • myrataal silver member
    February 3, 2002
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    Oh Patrick! What wonderful quatro ... thank you so much, my friend ...


  • repomen79 silver member
    February 3, 2002
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    Blood calls to blood across the night,
    To beckon love into the light,
    Of fires built with careful hands.
    She love, dear lord, she understands.............Again elegant and expressive. and love IS a verb.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 3, 2002
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    Thank you, Quabben, gift(s) bestowed on me by all the poets (read: people) treading my path, and by the Greatest Poet of all ...


  • Quabben
    February 3, 2002
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    Yes, love is a verb. Clever write M, you have the gift.

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