You caught my eye and
kidnapped my heart.
All with a word being
spoken, I was yours.
Your music engulfed my soul
and your eyes broke my shell.
I was yours, but only in
my dreams.
You belong to some one else,
always have and forever will.
My heart was shattered
the day I learned of it.
She loves you without a second
thought and I thought of
loving you, too.
But my fetal attempts
would have made you scoff.
I loved you without you
knowing, anyway.
I love you without caring
about anything.
I was yours, but only in
my dreams.
My heart aches for you,
I hurt for your love.
Still, against the night,
I hope for the love you've
given to another.
I want to be yours,
but only in my dreams.
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You started out strongly with very captivating and intense lines then it got weaker...The beginning was very creative and origibal then it got a little bit cliché. It is very sweet but I feel a lil bit disappointed because I was looking foreward to a more intense and heartbreaking end to show the desperation of the bruised lover...Thanks for the read and keep on writing!!!
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